Tuesday, December 15, 2015

Books lead ins and commentary

Works Cited Books

Monroe,Judy.Steroids,Sports,and Body Image. Berkley Heights New Jersey: Enslow

Publishers,Inc.,2004. Print.

Lead In: Judy Monroe, a children and young adults writer of multiple biographies

illustrates how young athletes hope to stand out to others. Athletes try to stand out by

taking drugs to perform at a higher level.

“ These drugs may tempt teen athletes at a time when they are looking for a performance

edge. Some may want to play well, hoping to earn a sports scholarship for college”

Commentary: Judy Monroe describes the situation of young athletes who wish to

compete at the college level. High school students are pushed by parents, teachers and

others to be at an exemplary level in every aspect of life. When it comes to sports in

particular athletes have found a way to make achieving their goals easier. Athletes are

tempted to take illegal substances to perform at a superstar level. This is a problem in

America that athletic associations are hoping to solve.

Egendorf,Laura,Performance Enhancing Drugs. San Diego Ca, Reference Point Press,

Lead in: Laura Egendorf, a young adult book writer who writes about adolescents issues

states how athletes are the apex of the social pyramid.

“ Few people are more admired in today’s society than successful athletes. Adolescents

view them as role models, adults clamor for their autographs and companies seek them

out to endorse products (Egendorf 8).

Commentary: Egendorf’s statement illustrates how athletes are the apex of the social

pyramid. Athletes seem to be above everyone in social status. The public wants to know

them and young people hope to be them. When athletes are using PED’s they influence

young athletes to do the same. The media spreads the news quickly and adolescents learn

that their heroes are frauds and didn’t work hard. Young adults then believe that they

need PED’s in order to be successful. Athletes have become the top of social status and

when they do illegal activities such as PED’s young generations are influenced to do the

works cited page

Monroe,Judy.Steroids,Sports,and Body Image. Berkley Heights New Jersey: Enslow

Publishers,Inc.,2004. Print.

Lead In: Judy Monroe, a children and young adults writer of multiple biographies

illustrates how young athletes hope to stand out to others. Athletes try to stand out by

taking drugs to perform at a higher level.

“ These drugs may tempt teen athletes at a time when they are looking for a performance

edge. Some may want to play well, hoping to earn a sports scholarship for college”

(Monroe 9)

Commentary: Judy Monroe describes the situation of young athletes who wish to

compete at the college level. High school students are pushed by parents, teachers and

others to be at an exemplary level in every aspect of life. When it comes to sports in

particular athletes have found a way to make achieving their goals easier. Athletes are

tempted to take illegal substances to perform at a superstar level. This is a problem in

America that athletic associations are hoping to solve.

Egendorf,Laura,Performance Enhancing Drugs. San Diego Ca, Reference Point Press,

2007. Print.

Lead in: Laura Egendorf, a young adult book writer who writes about adolescents issues

states how athletes are the apex of the social pyramid.

“ Few people are more admired in today’s society than successful athletes. Adolescents

view them as role models, adults clamor for their autographs and companies seek them

out to endorse products (Egendorf 8).

Commentary: Egendorf’s statement illustrates how athletes are the apex of the social

pyramid. Athletes seem to be above everyone in social status. The public wants to know

them and young people hope to be them. When athletes are using PED’s they influence

young athletes to do the same. The media spreads the news quickly and adolescents learn

that their heroes are frauds and didn’t work hard. Young adults then believe that they

need PED’s in order to be successful. Athletes have become the top of social status and

when they do illegal activities such as PED’s young generations are influenced to do the

same acitvities.

Accomplishment that has changed me

Aaron Rodriguez

Taumoepeau: Period 2

Ap Literature

October 6, 2014  

Winning a championship is the greatest experience in the world. Yet, it’s not the simple

fact of holding a trophy over your head which makes it satisfying but all the work that is

put into it to succeed, the brotherhood of picking each other up, and the own personal

benefit which makes a championship satisfying. The road to success is never easy yet for

me not only was it hard but unexpected. My freshman year of high school I had tried out

for the basketball team, but unfortunately I did not make it. I had gone to the coach and

asked him what I needed to work on, so I could be prepared for the next year, but before

we talked about that he had said that cutting me was a very hard decision to make. The

road of playing had seemed to have come to an end however, it had not. One day walking

down the halls some of the people who had made the team said the basketball coach

wanted to talk to me. This was a nerve racking experience because I had no idea what he

had to tell me since I had not been on the team. The coach had brought good news

someone had quit the team and a spot was open. He asked if I wanted it. I was overjoyed

with excitement not being able to feel my body almost in a state of floating. A second

opportunity was given to me and I had intended to make it count. The practices were

intense, most times I had messed up and the other player would yell at me. At first I had

been slightly offended but after getting to know my teammates I had realized that that

was just their passion for the game. Through the weeks and months I too had the same

passion as my teammates. The passion and grit we showed in practice definitely

translated into the games. Some games we would be up by 30 points and we would be

playing as if we were down by 5 and 2 minutes to go. This was instilled by our coach he

always said “don’t worry about the scoreboard just play the game”. Our coach would

push us extremely hard in practice running us all day long. The practices seemed to be

harder than the games some days I wouldn’t even think of doing homework because I

was so tired. I still did though because that was something that was instilled in us by our

coach, hard work. Hard work on the court and hard work in the classroom. The hard work

that we did paid off when we won the European Championship. Winning the champions

had great satisfaction but the greatest satisfaction was the hard work paying off and it has

become a core value of mine that I intend to carry through the rest of my life.

Saturday, October 17, 2015

Kristella Yap Pressure

Kristella Yap
October 2, 2015
Professor Kahwaji
English 96 Sec 51
My Resistance to Alcohol
       On many occasions, I have been pressured by my friends to drink. Many of my friends like to party and they tend to invite me sometimes. I’ve never drank or done drugs. Every time I hang out with my friends at parties, they always pressure me to drink. The external pressure would be my friends, since mostly everyone in parties drink when I’m the only one not drinking. My friends feel the need to offer me alcohol. They pressure me by saying, “It’s just for fun,” or “Just try it this once.” It gets annoying most of the time so I end up debating inside my head with my inner conscious; that would be my internal pressure. Sometimes when I see my friends drinking and having fun, I have the urge to join them. But the thing that always stops me are my values. I told myself that I plan to never drink and to never consume anything that has alcohol in it. I know the consequences of drinking so it’s not that hard for me to resist, but sometimes I have second thoughts. I would think. “That’s kind of fun,” or “It might not be that bad.” It’s hard when you’re the only one out of all your friends not drinking because they all get drunk and starts acting foolish. That’s also one of the reason why I don’t want to drink. The fact that I don’t like is how drunk people act. I don’t see or want to see myself acting foolishly. Another reason I don’t want to drink is because of my mom. I know she wouldn’t want me to disappoint her. My main reason is because of God. The Bible says in 1st Corinthians 6, “Don’t you realize that your body is the temple of the Holy Spirit, who lives in you and was given to you by God?” The quote illustrates that our body was given by God so therefore we have to take care of it. Since God is my number one priority, I always make sure to follow what God says. Whatever you do to your body, you’re also doing to the Lord. The Scripture says, “The two are united into one.” Which means that the person who is joined to the Lord is one spirit with him. So until now, I haven’t gone against my values and refuse to drink. I also plan to keep it that way forever. Now, I try not to go to parties that contain alcohol. Mostly, I avoid parties, whenever my friends want to hang out, I always pick the place. I also confronted my friends clearly that I don’t drink and never plan to, and they understood that. I would say that I am proud of myself. No one should ever be ashamed to stand up for their values. If a person does not want to do a certain thing, they should not be pressured to do it.